ACHIRON/MCTIGUE ADVERTISING & DIRECT RESPONSE

OUTERS....MAGALOGS....BILLING....RENEWALS....DONOR....INSERT CARDS....SALES LETTERS...PARTNERSHIPS...WRAPS



Circulation Ad Tip #9


BILLING EFFORTS SHOULD BE
RIGHT ON THE MONEY.

If it looks like an invoice, reads like an invoice, chances are it will be paid like an invoice. Too many billing efforts deviate from their primary mission: collecting money. They're often too promotional, containing distracting offers, and thus discarded as junk mail. Or their tone is too meek and appeasing, only encouraging the recipient to put off payment. A bill should be clear, simple and businesslike. Language should politely but firmly ask for payment. People won't be offended. They receive bills all the time. If you put in an extension offer, don't over-hype it. A single line with a check box will do fine. Here are some billing efforts we created that simply and compellingly boosted pay-up:


Billing Efforts

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GQ Billing Effort

OUTER ENVELOPE

 

INVOICE

 


New Scientist Billing Effort

OUTER ENVELOPE

INVOICE

 


Bottom Line Books Billing Effort

OUTER ENVELOPE

INVOICE


Reader's Digest Large Print Acknowledgment

OUTER ENVELOPE

INVOICE

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